Chapter 1-Jelly Beans!

Ai, wakes up from her sleep. She yelled "Stop waking me up dumb birds!". Everytime in the morning the chirping birds just wakes her up from her deep sleep. "Oooh, i hate birds especially on mornings like this they bug meeee....!", yelled Ai. Ai get up from her bed and goes to the bathroom. She took a bath and brush her teeth, with lots and lots of toothpaste. "I love the sweetness of toothpaste, it's so minty and super sweet!", said Ai before she puts the toothbrush in her mouth.

Ai slided down the stairs, and went to the kitchen and grabbed her lunch for school. "Careful honey!", said Ai's mom. Ai got out of the house and got on her scooter and rushes down the road. When she got to school it was still fairly early, actually it was still 6 in the morning. Ai headed to a big tree that was at the school yard, while eating some jelly beans in her school lunchbag.

Alexia, Ai's best friend since kindergarten shouted at her, "Hey, Sweetooth!". "Hi Alexia! What are you doing this early in the morining?Huh?Huh?" Asked Ai. "Waiting for you oh, Sweetooth. The great consumer of all things sweet. I got some Jellybeans from Paris!" Said Alexia so humbly. "My, my these are my favorites! Oooh...my sweetooth are craving for sweets around the world. Do you know how i loved sweets so much?" Asked Ai. Alexia asked why and Ai said that, "It all started with the Jelly Beans!". Ai and jellybeans goes way back since she was just a baby. She always brought some bags of jellybeans with her, while her pocket money is for buying more of her adored sweets.

Ai, afterwards get into the school while eating the Jellybeans and then...she dropped the whole bag and she slipped because of them. "Love hurts, like my love for these jellybeans..." Said Ai, and it was already seven o' clock and classes starts...

was getting bored at the forums so i thought i just write. Wait for the second chapter, "Chocolate is so Chocolicious!"

So full of suspense this story is, BQ.

Chapter 2-Chocolate is so Chocolicious!

It was christmas eve. The roads are frozen, the trees and the grasses all died and everything is covered in the white fluffy snow. The christmas tree is already standing inside the house decorated in beautiful lamps, candy cane, and gingerbread and on top was a star. The socks are all hanged up at the fireplace and the chocolate chip-cookies and milk are all placed on top of the fireplace.

"What do you think you're doing young lady?!", said Ai's mom to Ai. Ai was sneaking to the fireplace thinking if she can take one or two cookies that was placed on the fireplace. "But, mom...do you really believe that Mr. Santa Claus is going to come?", said Ai. Mom answered, "Who gave you the candy cane and the striped jellybeans for the past few years?". "Please, it was dad dressed in santa costume...like he needs all these cookies", said Ai. "You are such a sweetooth", said mom. Then Ai answered proudly, "That's my name don't wear it out!".

Ai took 2 cookies from the fireplace and took it to her room. She craved for some more and took 4 more cookies. It's not over yet, she took all the cookies and sneaked back in her room and ate all of it. And after all that cookies she still craved for some more. Ai went down the stairs and went to the kitchen, opened the fridge and grabbed the chocolate flavored candy canes and ate it all for herself. And it's still isn'ty enough. Ai still have an appetite for just one more box of chocolate. So she took a box of alcoholic chocolate that was delivered for her father. She ate 5 of it, and collapsed because she was drunk. "Chocolate is so chocolicious....", said Ai then she collapsed for real...

Wait for the next chapter, Chapter 3 "So much Popsicle...So little time"

Hehe, I like your creative titles.

Good thing she likes to brush her teeth =S

heh.. ^_^

'love hurts, like my love for these jellybeans'

i thought that was awesome ^^

keep writing, eh?

... Uh-oh. What will happen when Ai's parents find her collapsed in the kitchen the next morning? I never imagined that a simple love for sweets could land you into so much trouble.

are you kidding? eat too much sweets and it starts rotting out the insides of your cheeks. i'm totally serious. whether you brush your teeth every day or not. she's prolly going to get tooth cancer or something and that would be a very sad ending ;__;

Chapter 3-So much Popsicle...So little time

After the little "incident" Ai made at Christmas eve she was grounded until summer vacation. No sweets, no television, no music, no boys, and no more lunch with sweets..."that stinks!", said Ai.

Some months have passed and it was already the day before summer vacation. Ai, sadly is still depressed because she hasn't had any sweets for the passing months. She thought she could sneak some in her bagpack, but as she opened the fridge...all of the sweets are gone! So on this summer vacation she promised herself to buy 100 popsicles until she drop.

"So Ai, tommorow's summer vacation! What are you planning for the holidays?", Alexia asked. "Oh simple, i plan on buying myself some popsicles...", said Ai so sinisterly. "That's it? Are you serious?", ask Alexia again. "Of course...do you know how long have i waited for this day?! I wanna fill myself with 100 popsicles!!", said Ai. Then Alexia answered, "When she's depressed she always acts like this...it's scaring me...". Alexia then head to her car and said goodbye to Ai. Ai then went back to home with her scooter, however she stopped at the beach shack to buy some popsicles.

She bought 100 popsicle like she promised herself and she paid it with her whole allowance money. She then sat on the sandy beach while starring at the sunset. Ai took her time and one by one finishing the popsicles, in total she already finished 20 popsicles. But then it got pretty late and it's about nightime soon too. Ai then realized that all her other popsicles are melting and she panics. "Oh no, popsicle please don't melt! If you are gone, then i will fade away..." said Ai so sadly. She mourned over it becuase she couldn't finished it all and plus half of her money that she used are now useless if the popsicles are gone. Losing a popsicle is like losing a best friend, that's Ai philosophy.

Okay, um...thanks for the feedback you guys >___>

Wait for the next chapter, Chapter 4-Marshmallows Are Like Clouds in the Sky

Chapter 4-Marshmallows Are Like Clouds in the Sky

Summer vacation has ended and school has started again. Afterwards, autumn season has come! The leaves are falling from the trees leaving nothing but the branches. The air feels nice not cold nor hot, it was just perfect. Ai is currently at home while watching the leaves fall from the trees and looking up to the clouds.

Then suddenly Ai seemed to be strucked by a craving for sweets. She went downstairs and looked around at the kitchen for a bit and found a note on the counter, from Ai's mom. "Dear Ai, sweetheart please be good and don't cause any TROUBLE. Oh, and there's no food at the fridge and i just want to tell you that i've gone shopping. Take care of the house. Love, Mom". Ai put the note down the counter and looked around some more. She checked the pantry, the cabinets, and nothing is there.

Ai gave up the search and she thought to herself that she probably could just buy some sweets at the nearby candy shop. She took her jacket, put it around her and walked out the door. She walked down the road only to find the store has closed for a week, then Ai screamed, "Nooooo!! Not the candy shop!". Afternoon then turned to the evening, with Ai still doesn't find some sweets. She then headed back home. After she already got there she found another note on the counter, saying "Ai, honey i'm going to the mechanical store to buy some things. The grocery is already at the pantry and the fridge. Love, Mom".

Ai then ran so wildly and opened the fridge and...there were 5 marshmallow bags!! Ai was overjoyed and started crying with tears of joy. She took one bag of the marshmallow and started a fire at the fireplace and started to skewer the marshmallow. The marshmallow that was melted looked so yummy and fluffy, then Ai said "If only clouds were marshmallows, then the world is my heaven". She ate the marshmallow one by one until 2 bags were empty. She went upstairs and put her PJ's on and gone to sleep soundly...

Keep reading kay'? Next chapter is, Chapter 5-The Plain Jane Sugar!

'So much Popsicle...So little time', that made me chuckle .

Well there are a couple of grammar errors but I think it's pretty well written. Could use some more highly descriptive language and a little more variation in verb usage. But it certainly is an interesting tale of gluttony and hedonism.

^ now That makes me chuckle.



^__^ I liked these ones. hehe.
Your writing is good, I really enjoy reading these. If you want help on spelling or grammer though, I offer my services on that. I can be really picky about grammer if I choose to be.

I like these titles.
Keep writing.

yeah, i guess i did made some few grammar errors. I didn't pay attention to that since i was just writing like a little fast and didn't check back on the writings for any mistakes that i've made ^^

I'll be sure to contact you guys if i need some help >__<

So many stories to read, argh!
I should start continuing/fixing mine too...
Anyway, I'll finish rading this (and Dark John's story) in the weekend

Chapter 5-The Plain Jane Sugar!

It was still autumn and Thanksgiving is coming. Ai is still moping around her room as usual. Her mom and dad are away from the house, shopping for tommorows Thanksgiving. Shortly afterwards Alexia called, and said that tommorow evening she'll be joining Ai's family for Thanksgiving because her family is out of town.

"Oh, okay i'll be waiting for you tommorow then Alexia. Bye...", said Ai on the the phone. Ai ran torwards the living room and turned on the TV. There wasn't anything good on TV, all she found was only MTV, Cartoon Network, Star Sports, HBO, while the other channels seemed to be only news about thanksgiving. Ai kept scrolling the channel and stopped for awhile at a cooking channel.

And the recipe was...Jelly Cakes! Ai doesn't frequently cook that much although she does have a talent for it. She kept watching the cooking channel for around an hour. At four o' clock Ai's mom and dad got back home and brought so much groceries. Ai thought, that maybe she could make the jelly cakes that was on the cooking channel.

The next day at around three o' clock, Ai went downstairs from her room to the kitchen and started preparing all the necessary ingredients. Flour, milk, and...oh no! The sugar isn't there!! Ai asked her mom if she bought any sugar yesterday, and the answer was, "Oh dear! Yes, honey i forgot to buy the sugar". Ai freaked a little and asked if she could buy the sugar at the minimarket just down the street. Her mom gave her the money and Ai headed for the minimarket.

Ai then got back home, bringing 2 bags of sugar. She put the bags of sugar on top of the counter and started cooking the jelly cakes. The process...didn't go to well when Ai accidentally dropped a bag of sugar on the floor. Ai, other than known as swetooth she is also the Klutz Queen! So after that, Ai panicked like crazy and just thought if she should clean it up. But instead she wants to pick it up and eat it. She slowly put all the sugar in a glass and started eating them with nothing...just the plain jane sugar. "Nothing becomes sweet without the plain jane sugar", said Ai.

It was already evening, and dinner was served on that night. Alexia came and joined dinner with Ai. Everything went great, the food, the scenery, even the jelly cakes. It was delicious and now low fat because less sugar was used in the making. Ai got together with her family and the moonlit night was the best night since...

The story's not over yet, Chapter 6-That Baby Took my Lollypop!

That's quite an amusing outcome ^__^

Chapter 6-The Baby Took my Lollypop!

Autumn season is over. And the days gone by normally. Winter came, and passes away. The season changes quickly day by day. Not just the season changed, our gluttonous hero Ai also had some changes. Ai is now at High School, but sadly Ai and Alexia is now seperated. Alexia moved to Europe because she got a scholarship offer from there.

Ai cryed so many times when she thinks of Alexia, and would never stop. But one thing never changes of course...her love for sweets. Since Ai just started high school everything is still new to her. The school, the people, and not to mention what kind of challange will she be facing next...no one really knows. And also, she has a troubling time of finding some new friends.

It was Friday. Ai skipped school that day, because she wants to relax a little and forget about schoolwork just for the day. Ai's mom and dad are currently away having their second honeymoon. So Ai has the whole house to herself and no rules until her parents get back, "Ha ha ha ha!!".
Ai afterwards went to the park for an afternoon walk and finding some good ol' sweets. The park is a wonderful place. Birds chirping, kids playing, and...the candy stand! Ai hopped to the candy stand so spirited, and with a sweet smile on her face. Then she bought 10 lollypops for just 1 dollars, "It's a steal!" Ai said so happily. The lollypop was swirly and round and it looks good enough to eat.

Ai took a seat at a bench, and next to her was a woman with her baby. The woman went away to buy some hotdogs while leaving her baby. Ai started eating the lollypop until the baby saw her. "What are you looking at little...fellow?", said Ai. Then the baby answered "Goo goo gah gah!". Ai probably thought the baby wants her lollypop, so Ai gave the baby one of her lollypop. "Goo gah goo..." said the baby. Then Ai said, "Oh...you like it don't you little baby...H-hey!". Suddenly the baby slapped one of the lollypops that Ai was holding. Ai put the remaining lollypop on the bench while she took the lollypop that just fell, and the baby took the lollypop on the bench. The baby's mother came back and took her baby and walked away.

After Ai got her lollypop back she looked around a bit and found that her lollypop is gone! The darn baby took her lollypop. Ai also can't eat the lollypop that just fell, because it's already covered in dirt so there's really nothing she can do. "This is karma for those who takes candy from a baby...and i'm one of them" said Ai. She confessed to herself that she actually did took candy from a baby long, long ago...

Stay tuned for more stories! Chapter 7-When a Bubblegum Pops...

;__; retribution to the max.

Heh. Awesomeness to the max. ^_^