need some input.

I was wondering should I explain the incident in my game. You know like some movies have a character with a past that they refer to but don't tell. Movies like Man on Fire. Denzel has a past that bothers him but never divulges what happened. Should I do this or should I explain the characters past?

Been awhile but I am now proud to say that the first chapter is virtually done. I only need to put in the stats of ten monsters, and it will be finished. This will be my first demo, but before that can come out I've got to find a Dex Drive. Well this is a special day for me, because I've accomplished something on Rpg maker for once that I am actually proud of.

Anyway there's 12 blocks of system data 14 blocks of scenario data and 4 custom characters. So that's two whole memory cards. Sorry for the length, but for the first chapter to be what I envisioned, it had to be. Heck I needed more memory. I wanted to throw in a blacksmith and a minigame, but those had to be cut for space.

Anyway random battles are set to 1 for the least amount of encounters as possible, I was gonna place the monsters manually but that was more work and I'm mentally exhausted right now. So after I finish these last monsters and find a Dex Drive I'm gonna take a little break. Then I'll hop back into this game and start Chapter two! I've got high hopes for Chapter two.

great plot! the idea of making the story a human struggle instead of a save-the-world story has been a goal of mine for a while now.

to tell you the truth, i thought having the Defender in the story would actually make it better; give the story another viewpoint; preferably opposing one. but its prolly too late to add him back in.

anyway, good luck. can't wait to see how it turns out.

Well It's not too late to add him in. I still have to create the other two chapters. The first chapter is done and is now my demo, all I need now is a dex drive. Seeing as though I'm flat broke right now, thanks to splurging on games, I'll have to wait till I get paid to order a drive. I also need more memory cards, because I barely scraped by finishing this first chapter. Well I hope to have the demo out in September, provided I luck up and find a dex drive.

Wow. Just wow. NICE story. Hell, I haven't read a good story like that for awhile!

Anyway, I think the intro you gave at the beginning of this topic would be suitable to start out, and then have the Incident be explained afterwards, maybe in chapter 2 if it hasn't been revealed already. Because, while it is interesting, I'd like to see how well Valus fares in regrouping his people more.