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PostPosted: December 13th, 2006, 12:36 pm 
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I would like to offer up my services. If anyone would like their short stories or rpgs (I only have RPGM3) proofread, I would be happy.

I minored in writing in college and really enjoy being of help. This is primarily for grammar, spelling and style (word choice, structure ...). I will not discuss content, except when I feel I have something worthwhile to add.

One more word: I can be quite harsh (no crybabies allowed).

I will be posting some of my short stories soon, so you guys can see how I write.

I hope I didn't scare everyone off. If you're interested then either reply right here, or pm me if you wish to keep it more private.


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I might have you proofread the changes I've made to my story "Inexistence".

I just have to go back and edit some things I know aren't very good.

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PostPosted: December 13th, 2006, 7:17 pm 
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Hey, atreides, do you suppose you could give your writer's feedback on a Star Ocean 2 fanfic I posted up here a while back?

Back a few years ago when I first wrote it, I had really thought that the story was all that and the bag of chips or whatever, ... but since having gone through Composition class in college, I am beginning to think that I still missed at least a few essential rules for good writing. (I appreciate the positive feedback from the two or three people at the Mag whom have already read it, though!)

If you could critique my story (entitled "Forever Rena" over on the Creativity +++ forum), I think that would be quite useful to improving my skill in writing as a whole. ... And feel free to tell it how it is, just like you said you would. I can take your criticism and whatever else you got, man!

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PostPosted: December 13th, 2006, 7:35 pm 
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My first job!

Hey SK, I don't think I've met you yet, but I know a bit about you and your project from Lantis. I hope things are going well with SOE.

Anyways, I'd be happy to, of course.

I just realized that I didn't mention turnaround times. All I can say is that they will vary: sometimes I'll be quick, sometimes I'll be slow.

I hope to have yours edited/critiqued soon.


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PostPosted: December 13th, 2006, 7:52 pm 
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No problem, atreides. You have a busy life just as the rest of us do. I'll just be grateful for your having taken the time to help, regardless of how fast or slow it takes.

But, no need to worry about not having formally met me, yet. All you need to know about what kind of person I am is that Sarah's Knight is a hopeless romanticist who has a childish fantasy about being some noble swordsman of the Light from an RPG.

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