After you read the plot please rate and tell me what you think of it.

It has been 100 years since the dragons attacked. Battle after Battle, the two sides seemed even. The human government went for the final strike and sent their best general and their best soldiers with him. That man's name was Heru. After that 2 month battle the dragons ultimatly won. They took over the human country and treated them like slaves. They ate them, made them wash and polish their scales, made them look out for their dens, and many thing like that. They also attack communities, these places are lucky as they aren't slaves, for taxes and if 5 people don't pay the whole village get destroyed. One day A 17 year old boy/man who lost nearly everything but his friends, decides to fight and take on the dragons to force them out of the country. His friends, having lost everything too go along with him. Why shouldn't they, after all they have nothing to lose. Will they succeed or will they become play toys or become supper for the dragons?

Sounds pretty basic for a plot.

What is the motivation behind a dragon attack? Why does a 17 year old decide to take on the dragons? He can't possibly think he'd be a match for them unless they have some type of special powers or something.

Which RPG Maker is this for 1, 2, 3, or XP?

3. The dragons want to expand their empire like the French and British in the 16-1700s. The teens have NOTHING left to lose and they have skills. For example the main character's best friend is a Monk/fighter and his close Second best friend will be a Archer/Marksman. I already have a sequal in mind that takes place 50 years after this

Well, there are several nice dragon shots in the storyteller mode and you can create different monsters to fight which are dragons. Other than that I guess things are left up to good descriptive writing and the player's imagination. Sounds like your figuring out the plot as you go. That's not always a bad thing, though, seeing as you have to work within the limits of RPG Maker 3. You can make a good game with this if you put your mind to it.

Oh, by the way, welcome to the RPGMMAG

What are you talking about welcome I've been here for 4 months. I just don't use my account much. Do you think it has potential because the sequal I have the plot done. I'm 17 and I spent 3 years writing a book on the the Sequal. Do you think it should stay when DRagon Attacks or Quoteo:The beginning?

Oh, sorry, please don't take offense. I just saw the post count, not the date you joined on here. I apologize. I just don't think I ever said HI.

What is Quoteo? Is that the name of a place?

That's great that you've been working on writing the sequal for several years and you're only 17. Sweet! I would recommend keeping an open mind as far as game creation goes. No RPG Maker game engine will be able to be exactly like your book. If you're cool with that, then, yeah, you can make a good game.

Quoteo is the main character of every game after this one. This game just tells the tale of how they came up with the idea that made the government so currupt.

You should definitely call it Quoteo: The Beginning, then. Cool.

MAn I wonder why more people like that title. So yeah by the time of the sequal the main of the first game are dead of old age

Because "When Dragons Attack" sounds like the title of some cheesy horror movie. Like "When Zombies Attack" or "When Cheerleaders Attack". I'm pretty sure someone already said that at the Pav.