My Verse for Just Write's "808"

Bonanza · **Posted:** December 17th, 2009, 4:27 pm

The single hasn't been released yet, but here's what I wrote down. The song is about Just Write telling his woman that her body is like an instrument, and he wants to "play with [her]."

Okay, now my verse:

Come hither
Voluptuous stress-killer
A beauty that grows clearer
As your aura gets nearer to me
Your bod’s slender like a violin
Baby, let me have a spin
Loosen up the strings
Then I’ll make you send

Falsettos
As steamy as tea kettles
And baby, they won’t settle
As they bounce off the walls
Into the halls
Neighbors could be tempted to call
Why should I stall?
Both of us are oozing with petals

Of unbelievable sweat
And bouncing more than a check
That people tend to neglect
French kissing, dismissing
Any evident threats
From the people still flippin’
‘Bout our musical sex
It’s as real as it gets

But once I finish this set
Of which we’ll never forget
I’ll be staring right at her
The remnants of our big deed scattered
A love platter
Physical, lyrical, sensual
You can’t help it all, but be flattered

Let me know what you think.

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