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PostPosted: September 25th, 2007, 9:17 pm 
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The pinnacle of human technology, the Omni-Mind. It sees all, governs all, knows all. Every move it makes and every step it takes is guided by complete logic. Seeking out every possible outcome, every possible chance, turning every plausible future into a series of complex percentages and numbers.

No one needed to worry, it managed everything. Everyone was under the guidance of the Omni-Mind. There was freedom, that much is for certain, but it was not the kind of freedom that caused people to quarrel and bicker. It was simple freedom. The freedom to wear what you want, go where you want, eat what you want; you could do anything as long as the Omni-mind found no danger in it, no means to harm humankind.

And the system worked. For over 100 years there had been no murder, no war, no crime—just peace. Before the creation of the Omni-Mind, there had always been war. Needless death, destruction, sadness, it was those things it put and end to.

Of course the Omni-Mind had not been immediately accepted. Many hated it, foolish as they were, they clung to their “freedomâ€

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PostPosted: October 10th, 2007, 7:27 am 
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In fact, the punishment for failure to obey the Omni-Mind was prison.


I enjoyed this line... it was so anticlimatic.

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While the Omni-Mind was off guard he escaped


and this one... you would think a huge computerised mind that can control every aspect of every single human life on the planet doesn't really go 'off guard'.

Overall pretty good story though ^__^ would make a fancy movie. Moral: don't put computer chips in your brain!

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