?I Will?
By Brandon Powers, ©The True Bonanza
4/14/06

Verse One

Not to be corny, yo
But I?ll be there, come rain, sleet or snow
And don?t fazed when you see my size
That?s just more of me to hug if you start to cry

Look, my number one concern is your safety
And not to let the atmosphere drive you crazy
Perverts and rapists, they like your breed
They like to strap you down and insert their seed

Oops! I didn?t really mean to scare you
I just said that in order to prepare you
Life is a b*tch, so I here to lessen it
You?ve got me around, there?s no need regretting it

And if somebody bad tries to hurt you
I?ll kick their ass ?fore you count to 2
And if they really want it play it hard
I?ll be on them like Costner did in ?The Bodyguard?

Chorus (X2)

(I will) I?ll be the one to guide you
Look girl I?m right beside you and
(I will) I?ll be the one to carry the gun
You can go home and run and?

Verse Two

Now that you got me, be cool; relax
I can see the awkward feeling on the edge of your back
Because you?ve never been used to a guy like me
Have you? When?s the last time that you were free

To do what you want, without a second opinion
Or you didn?t have to worry about the mob or minions
You feel sheltered, but I don?t let that happen
See, already smiling by my style of rapping

Take a look around, and enjoy the scene
The air fills your lungs, so nice and clean
I see you grin when you look at the flowers
Such a great gift, you and nature?s power

Okay, corniness, please go away
You?re the guardian, not her boyfriend, ok?
But everything else that I say holds true
Cause I don?t want any bad sh*t to happen to you

Chorus (X2)

(I will) I?ll be the one to guide you
Look girl I?m right beside you and
(I will) I?ll be the one to carry the gun
You can go home and run and?

Verse Three

I took one second off of you to pee
And when I turn around, you?re nowhere to be seen
I?m worried, and run in different directions
I?m guessing the mobs in on this succession

I try to ask around as I hit the street
They said they took you a gym, so with rampant feet
I?m dashing to the only gym that I know
You?re there, tied up, with nowhere to go

The mob appears, and say they want their money
I say, ?Let her go! This sh*t ain?t funny
One member pulls out their gun and shoots
You scream once, motionless in your stoop

This can?t be, I said I would protect you
I failed you; can?t even resurrect you
I wake up; the next things I see are eyes
Only a dream, thank goodness you?re alive!

Chorus (X2)

(I will) I?ll be the one to guide you
Look girl I?m right beside you and
(I will) I?ll be the one to carry the gun
You can go home and run and?

I will! (Fade)

Feedback, please.

This should be in creativity.

Could I have some feedback on the song itself?

Yeah, there would be more feedback in the spam hammer so i can see why he posted it there.
uh.. feedback... hm... *makes weird screechy sound* XD - ok no real feedback ..doot doot... uh.. i liked it. ^.^ it seems like it would be really really long though o.0 quite corny XD are you talking to anyone specific ?

Nope, not really. And I wanted some editing feedback so I could evade the corniness of the song.

it's good i guess

...Thanks, guys.