It seems I have some catching up to do! I didnt noticed you continued the story.

I'm already way ahead of ya. Thanks for the advice, though.

Here is Chapter 2 of story 2. Enjoy.

Chapter 2: The REAL Ultimate Life Form

As soon as we got to Tails’ house, we explained to Tails about our situation and how we needed to change my DNA to save Cream. I noticed that Tails was a fox with two tails. “No wonder they call him ‘Tails,’â€

It looks like I'm not getting a lot of replies here. Is my stories really that boring?

... *comments*

... *doesn't really have much to say*

I think it's interesting. I always enjoy fanfiction because of what kind of strange random mixes you can get with it.

i'm not much of a literary critic though sorry. but it's not boring ^__^ quite fast paced acutally.

Thank you. I will continue my stories, even if there are no replies.

ah, crikey. seriously, you've posted a lot since i was last here ^_^

i read through. seriously, your imagination kicks my imagination's ass. i enjoyed reading... and i really enjoyed the mention of sonic at the end of the first story.

... seriously, really do keep writing. people are reading, even if they're not sure what to say. to this date this topic has had 206 views, by my count. i think you can assume people are reading. ^_^

Here is the final chapter and the epilogue of story 2. Enjoy.

Chapter 3: Clash! John X vs. Vector the Crocodile

The next morning, I was busy picking flowers with Cream. It wasn’t a fun thing to do, but hey. I had to do something. “Which do you like better, Mr. John: a red rose or a daisy?â€

I haven't read anything lately, but that's due to my lazyness.
But I hope to catch up soon (It seems you have posted quite a bit, but I LOVE reading so that's not really a problem for me)

red bull, it gives you wings! >__> k that was lame.

good to see the nice guy win for once. ^.^

Here is the prologue of story #3 Enjoy.

John’s Adventures 3: Brawl For All
By: John H. Stubbs

Prologue

Ding, dong! Ding, dong! Those were church bells ringing. I was officially married to Vanilla the Rabbit. We were at a wedding party with our entire friends there. Hey! Even Dr. Eggman was there. I guess you’re wondering if I was a child or an adult when I stepped through the portal. Well, I stepped through the portal as an adult and came into Sonic’s world as...an adult. I don’t know why, but Tails once told me that a person named Chris Thorndyke came to this world as a child. “I wonder why I came here as adult and not a child. Wait! Could it be because of my Jurai powers?â€

I don't think I'll be publishing my stories because someone said that it would be illegal. Somebody help me!

yeah... publishing it and then selling it, that's illegal. i suppose you could privately publish (ie; pay for a publishing company to produce a certain number of copies), but i don't know much about that. even if you privately published, you certainly wouldn't be able to sell what someone else has already intellectually copyrighted.

i don't know how much it costs to privately publish (though i've known poets who have done it, for instance), nor if there is any legal way to privately publish what someone else has intellectually copyrighted. if you were interested in getting your stuff published, though, that'd be by far the best plan of action. you'd have to check up what i've said, and what i've said i don't know too. ^_^ just so you don't end up getting sued or anything...

... i'm not sure about any of it, tbh. it's just a thought.

Thanks, Regal. I'll think of something to do.

hope it works out for you, bud.

well you could always just change around the copyrighted names in your story. i mean.. the plot is your own, that's what fanfiction is about right? creating your own plot with someone else's characters. so if you change the copywrighted parts to something original then you arn't stealing anyone's intellectual property.
the sonic part would prolly be the most difficult to change because of the characters descriptions being too familiar.. but tons of people have used a world of animals. you could probably quite easily change what the animals were, mostly tails and sonic really.
well... it's a suggestion.

yeah, he could have a different blue hedgehog and fox with sneakers.

... nah, i actually think that's a very good alternative. it just depends if changing characters around is what you want to do. ^_^

No. I just want my characters to be in different worlds. It's kind of like Kingdom Hearts, but different. Maybe if I could contact Sega. That would be a funny thing to do.

Ladies and gentleman, John's Adventures has recently passed away. I will not be posting any more of John's Adventures. But something new will come. I can tell you that much. If you want to know, send me a message and I will tell you what I've come up with. In the meantime, John's Adventures is officially dead. Thank you for your time.

-DJX