First things first:

http://www.rpgmmag.com/preview_faq.php

This is a guide that will help you in your quest to structure your content to fit with the site.

Below, I will provide feedback on the 2 current reviews you have submitted.

General
The Title and Database Title are basically supposed to be 2 variations on the same thing. Therefore, the main reason to use them for is as follows:

I have a game called "The Crimson Blade" to review. The full, standard name "The Crimson Blade" is what the Title is. This is what you see on the game's page. The database title, on the other hand, is what is used to organize with database commands. Because I can't predict the title of the game, I use the database title for listing purposes. Therefore, here, you would not add a different title. Instead, you would put "Crimson Blade, The". This helps out a lot in the long run.

Article URLs
The "_review.php" (or other) part is automatically added to the url. This is not explicitly said, though.


Devil Hunter Monoko
1. The game's name is Devil Hunter Monoko.
2. title is spelled "tittle" in the review

Presentation
Capital letters missing:
"they're fun" on that sentence talking about cutscenes.
"tifa".

Features
"Exorcist" to "Exocism".

Fun
"Henti" to "Hentai"

Overall
"give it a try" to "Give it a try"
"RPG maker" to "RPG Maker"
"supper" to "super"
"i" to "I"
One final question mark at the end, since you're asking a question.

Also, instead of 78 in that number, it's going to be a 7.75 game.

Overall

The article has the quality information, but it needs corrections.

Fu-Fu The Acid-Trip Bunny

Presentation
"the whole concept" to "The whole concept"
"dieing" to "dying"
"games evil mystery boxes" to "game's ...."
"where well arranged" to "were ...."

Features
"then the RPG's" to "than the RPGs"

Overall
"i" to "I"
"Mr. Cater" to "Mr. Carter"
"hes" to "he's"
"any" to "Any"

The score should be changed to 9.5.

Overall
A very solid review, content-wise. Just needs to the corrections noted above.

thanks.

how do i edit it?

edit: i read the faq and didnt find it as helpful as id of liked.

edit2: there appears to be a problem with my ssa name. when making it it wouldnt let me choose karr lord of chaos which is my site name so i choose karr chaos (but it wouldnt take that either) so i had to put it all together. in the review i forgot this so its not actually attached to my name. can you just change the whole thing to reflect my forum name?

as a side note i found reading multiple reviews to be helpful in creating mine, though i adapted the information i posted later on to fit the criteria.

It depends on what you chose for your name, really. If you put it all together, then it would work.

So KarrChaos will work.

so it works if its different? if so then can you change the reviews to be karrchaos rather then karr chaos?

You can, too. Just change the writer name.

again, i cant change it because i dont have an edit button anywhere to do so. ive poured over every inch of the contribution pages and there is nothing i can use to edit my reviews.

Oh, I understand the situ now.

On the Archive page, there is a direct link beside the article you made that says "Edit". However, this relies completely on your username.

A good way to ensure that your writer name and SSA name are the same would be to copy your name from the top of the page where it says:

"Welcome back username, you are logged in. "

If you copy that, no worries.

Everything is fixed for you, though, so you can go ahead and make corrections.

thanks! ill fix it tonight when i get off work.

i updated the reviews and i think ive got it now. ill fix up some more later on. i will add some pictures once i figure out what i should take a snapshot of. going forward i think ill take a pic of my favorite scene.

As long as it's not a spoiler picture.

naw, i usually like to take picks of cool minigames, or an interesting environment. i avoid spoilers in my reviews too, even when explaining a bug.

Karr, your interactions with the system have been extremely helpful in crushing some errors that are currently present. Thanks!