I have planned the first 2 games of a series and started planning the 3rd('Would have started making them but the person I bought my PS2 from is a crook who took all his money and got banned from E-bay) it seems good but I have very little experience with these things. Just putting it out there.

My games would be awsome if I actually had the game..

Which Maker are these games for?

The first 2 will be for RPG Maker 3 and the third for RPG Maker 1 or 2, not sure. I was maybe thinking of making a Fighter Maker game around it called, The Coloseium: Heroes of ages version 2 (Same name as the third one just different type of game). If no one will play a Fighter Maker game I won't make it, though.

You can only make fighters (as in the people, not the genre) in the Fighter Maker games. Can't really create an actual game with them.

I know.

Alright, here is the first story/beginning:

(Sad music, castle background)
Through history there has been a building, a place of eternal pain, this building has been around forever for it is the hate within us all. this place has stood since the world was created and was thought to be there for all pirpituity until

(Heroic music, village background)
A hero, awaked by a dream, decides to finaly rid the world of evil, a hero who is rumored to be an avatar of the gods, found in the woods as an infant with nothing but a glowing orb protecting him from the forests many perils. He sets out, knowing of the evil that awaits but also knowing that this is his destiny, to keep hate from the world...forever...

I might change it some.

I like that the "building" is a manifestation of all of our hate. But can you describe the building in more detail. Is it a dreary castle? A tower that sees over all the land spreading its evil? Or is it contemporary, as in it changes with the times as the inhabitants of the world (who are the true reason for its existense through their own hatred) themselves change as a sociaty?