before i get into the help portion of this that i need id like to show off some of what i have made.

lobby of the future portion of my game

the black stuff that didnt show up is the pulsing background. its meant to be like a bullet proof force shield or something.

"dieing" trees in front of a tower

does it really look as bad as it does right now?

cafeteria of the futuristic part of my game

up top is the arcade games where you can play 3 games (one machine is broken) the games will be sim date, castlevania special edition , and a racing game. wish me luck on having enough memory to do it. below it is the computer graphic i made as well as the desk top i designed to hold it.

security room

how does it look? the lower part is "cracked z alloy glass," a broken version of plexiglass i guess. the big monstrosity is meant to be a super computer. how does it look? does it even look close to that?

a kind of brief vid of my port town
http://www.nightmareknights.com/game/gamefiles/MVI_0311.AVI

continuation of said port town
http://www.nightmareknights.com/game/gamefiles/MVI_0312.AVI


now onto the sim game which i am having problems. first some pictures and videos which ill use as demonstration.

the intro to the sim game, full avi (15 seconds or so long)
http://www.nightmareknights.com/game/gamefiles/MVI_0304.AVI
do you like the animation so far? (i know it isnt a lot)

a clip of the next part but where he gets out of the car (5 seconds long i think)
http://www.nightmareknights.com/game/gamefiles/MVI_0306.AVI
tell me if you think it works or if its absurd (car and human size).


dance hall


park


bar


beach


room


clock



the game starts off with suave enricka (forgot the spelling already), who is a player, a ladies man. your job is to get into the bed of the ladies. there is 6 random chicks, a pedo chick (age 17) who your goal here is to not sleep with her, to a porn dancer who you can score points for not sleeping with her (raise your standards fellas), to a workaholic, a native chick, to a short chick whos sensitive about her height, and a 6th who i am pulling a blank and will have to get back to you on that.

you choose your own adventure, scoring points for each correct thing you say that will get you inside their pants. at the end of the night, providing you have given them the date of their dreams, they may sleep with you earning you a prize. you choose every step of the way, choosing from three places to eat, and to three places to go after dinner. each place has its own unique points and dialog to score with and some places will not be the right places for your dates.

my problem is ive hit a road block. i cant seam to develop dialog or story for any type of senario so ive turned to you. help me develop their stories where ever you can. give me ideas of what could happen at each step, what types of things to add. i really need to do this cheaply for space but if i get pinched ill push some things out or move the game to the 3rd senario card.

pist, would be nice to get some help here.

well, just do whatever you want with it. Make it crazy is what I would say. Make the craziest possible scenarios.

You need to take a break and just write out whatever comes to mind. Just take those loose ideas and make more complicated points off them and you'll get your story.

i am almost done designing the battle system for my castlevania style game. ive also cleared a card to start the 3rd scenerio card so i dont have to get bored of all the tedious work and i can work on the story of the 3rd part rather then get boxed in.

when i finish the second card ill play through everything i got and release it as a demo. lord knows when ill get to that phase as i havent finished my mini games and two of the storyline pieces arnt finished (plus ive done no finishing details).

I am honestly interested in that castlevania minigame. Good Luck for sure.

if your really intrigued, when i finish the mini game ill send you a copy of just that so you can see how you like it and let me know how i should improve it. wont be for a month or two though, depends how motivated i am to finish it.

Sounds cool. I may have my compatability issues resolved by then so that I can use my dexdrive/DB9 PCI card/Vista combo. (To fix it I might be putting XP on a seperate HDD )

Keep us up to date!

I personally loved the red trees.